/comment.php?chapter=1&id=176902
Comments - 我獨自成為封測玩家 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 我獨自成為封測玩家
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
語者
加油，看得出來作者在寫書之前搞了很多的設定集，但我覺得可以等用到的時候再說明就好

然後主角的個性我覺得目前特色真的不高
9 months agoReply
執墨客
聽你上次提出來後
我自己回去重新閱讀一遍
也發現了這個問題
不過可能我還沒能厲害到一開始就把主角的人格設定成很扭曲
比如很瘋什麼的
或許改文的時候我會試著往這方面塑造的
9 months agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.