I love it! Players can make their own decisions in a storylet, but this is certainly the path any self-respecting person would take. Thank you for your submission. You may edit it until the end of the contest, but I have nothing to criticize. :)
I think I might keep it as is. I just think that if I edit it any more I'll be too frustrated for words about how it should be versus how it is. Thank you for thinking it's good!