Mk, i will ake your sudjestion for the first chapter and if anyone has any other sudjestion then please say so. Also I would like you guys to tell me what her flaws and the things she is not good at. You all can talk about that together.

Okay so I have one. What if Isabell's cover gets blown? She's been posing as Anibel at school but then she has a fake friend somewhere (not her best friend tho), who finds out. The fake friend is a fan of mystery and suspense novels and she manages to connect the dots and find out!
Also no offense but you might want to check your spellings, and maybe give your characters a bit more dimension. Isabell can't just be perfect, and have an absolutely perfect life. That's not fair to the rest of us normal people lol
(This was copy pasted from the dm btw)