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世水
看的出來作者對畫畫有著深深的怨念啊😂！
不過我覺得人物互動滿詼諧生動的～ 尤其是主角和老頭間的對話，讓人笑到手差點沒握住手機 ：）

作為開篇，很不錯！👍 超期待主角的新奇幻人生～
一點小小建議，畫面轉場可以再多點細節描述，銜接可能更自然哦
1 year agoReply
nightrain
謝謝你的建議！也希望之後的文章能讓你開心

1 year agoReply
夏夏
被神明套路了www
1 year agoReply
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