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海貍
很有趣的開頭！感覺很像什麼穿越者大本營之類的。
另外建議引號前的標點符號可以再修正一下。
9 months agoReply
E先
是野生的海貍大佬！！，之前沒注意到標點符號的問題，謝謝大佬的閱讀XD。
9 months agoReply
海貍
@E先,嚇我一跳，你怎麼知道我是誰😂
我才不是什麼大佬啦
9 months agoReply
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