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Penulisan boleh di improve. Tak perlu ulang2 adik syafiqah, dan kakak aisyah, just tulis syafiqah dan kak aisyah pun dah cukup. Ibu fiza pun tak perlu, ibu je dah cukup.
Kalau boleh, tambah sedikit dialog. Baru best.
Perenggan pun boleh edit bagi banyak sikit. supaya tak terlalu panjang
Overall okay. idea dah ada! terbaik!