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The Virtual Shadow
This is awesome!

Kinda working on mine, mine i always think is never really good or cleverly written
9 years agoReply
ShadowBobcat10
When I first write anything, I think everything is too obvious, but after sitting on it for a few days, I start to see the art. I'm sure you'll see the beauty in your poem in time.
9 years agoReply
The Virtual Shadow
@ShadowBobcat10, Poem. not my strong suit. I more so go with art, picture the instruments, the beat played and how its sung.

but your are right. Keep at it and you can see the details and what makes it better.
9 years agoReply
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