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aefadawsd

This is good. I like the dystopian world here.

8 年前回覆

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

Thanks! Ha, ha, I had read 1984 before now, but recently I read Flatland and We, so the next issues will be influenced by my refreshed dystopian experiences.

8 年前回覆

Maria3313

The start kind of reminds me of LoZ- main character wakes up, and THE ADVENTURE STARTS! Also, how'd she change from human to cat(wolf?)-girl so fast? There's no hints as to what had happened to her to get her like this, from what I can see!
Other than that, it is GREAT so far. The descriptive language is perfect! And KoKoSo's quirkiness! I love it!

8 年前回覆

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

Thanks! Yeah, she woke up and things kicked off from there...eh, I have some stuff to go over again, I'll try to set aside time for polishing for after my NoNaWriMo rush is settled down.

8 年前回覆

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Oh, also, that's explained later...I'm going to have a few things that get explained after they show up.

8 年前回覆