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roseofnoonvale

great plot, the ending wasn't necessarily bad, just a little rushed. I like the way the details are learnt.

11 years agoReply

shnuffeluv

This is really good! I'm not one to read a lot of horror, but this proves an exception! Keep up the wonderful work!

11 years agoReply

RavenDuchess

Thanks! :D

11 years agoReply

Coen Wonder

The plot is actually very good. I like how we learn about the murdering processby reading her written words in the interview. However, I agreed that the ending is a bit of a rush.
Btw, what does EMS stands for? Maybe you can clarify that and tell us a bit more about William Edwards?
Suggestion - Maybe Justice receive something (like an item or note) from William Edwards in the car which helped her to get over her emotions etc.? Just some thoughts.
Anyhow, Good Luck!

11 years agoReply

RavenDuchess

Thank you for the feed back. When I go back to edit, perhaps I'll add those little tidbits c:

11 years agoReply

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