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Ducky
This story is fast-paced but not too fast, and easy to get lost into. I kind of hope for more description, but that's just me being picky haha X{D Overall a fantastic story and a great concept! I will be coming back for more.
ShadowBobcat10
Thanks! I've got a bit more description in the next chapters, but I will definitely try for more :D
I'm not a big fan of breaking the 4th wall in stories, but this opening hits you with a bang. Great intro to the story! That hook was flawless. This had everything a first chapter needed. Great, great work!
ShadowBobcat10
Thank you so much!
Kitty
So good! Can't wait for the next issue XD
ShadowBobcat10
Oh, thanks! I think next up will be a story about a Time Killer Catcher. So we see both sides of the story :)
MousyCh
I really like this. So much that I read it twice :) Good job!
ShadowBobcat10
Thank you so much.
It's really well written :D
Conflagration Blitz
I agree!! It's brilliant! Keep up the good work :)
ShadowBobcat10
@Jess Rufus, Thank you so much, guys. But with so much pressure, I don't want to let you down next issue!
Conflagration Blitz
@ShadowBobcat10, It's okay, just take your time and have fun with it ;)
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