An interesting start with a dark atmosphere that draws in the reader. Good introduction of Zeiss, it already gives an intriguing insight on the character. And nice cover by the way :) Will you continue the story?
Thank you so much! I plan on continuing this story and do ten chapters after I finish my other short series. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! ❤️❤️
Very quick hook into the story. Its left very open to what could happen with the goals/tribulations of the characters. Overall a good quick read that leaves you with questions and wanting more.
Your writing is well done and the narration has a smooth flow. You manage to immerse the reader into the dystopian setting of the story (the 18+ warning is certainly there for a reason) and create interest around Zeiss and the mysterious creature he comes across.
Overall a good quick read that leaves you with questions and wanting more.
Your writing is well done and the narration has a smooth flow. You manage to immerse the reader into the dystopian setting of the story (the 18+ warning is certainly there for a reason) and create interest around Zeiss and the mysterious creature he comes across.
I'm eager to read the next chapters.