Hello,

I hope this message finds you well! I recently had the
pleasure of exploring your captivating story, and I must say it left a lasting
impression. Your narrative is both rich and compelling, and I believe it would
translate beautifully into comic art. As a commission artist specializing in
adapting literary works into dynamic comic formats, I see great potential in
bringing your story to a wider audience through this medium. I would be
delighted to work with you on this project. If you're interested, I’d love for
you to review my portfolio, where you can see how I transform stories into
visually engaging art. I look forward to discussing this further and hearing
your thoughts.



Feel free to connect with me on Discord or through my social media:


Discord:
Gancalo.morata
Twitter:
@GotGancalo
Instagram:
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Email:
gancalomorata@gmail .com


Thank you for considering this opportunity. I genuinely hope
to hear from you soon!

Warm regards,

Jessica

Zeiss is having a bad day. Phew! Relieved that his eye has been repaired.

Love this!!!! Love the story, love the worldbuilding! I'm hooked! The only thing is you could maybe include more of what the characters are feeling!

An interesting start with a dark atmosphere that draws in the reader. Good introduction of Zeiss, it already gives an intriguing insight on the character. And nice cover by the way :) Will you continue the story?

Very quick hook into the story. Its left very open to what could happen with the goals/tribulations of the characters.
Overall a good quick read that leaves you with questions and wanting more.