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開幕角色太多還挺亂(也難寫) 是個人感覺
如果要重編所有人的戲份,整部作品就要進入停更了ˊˋ(因為我都寫完三分之二了,要改會變大工程肯定得花時間ˊˋ
一個好的開首能更有效抓住讀者想看下去的意欲。
當然這只是個人意見,要不要修改是作者的選擇。