Interesting read. I came at this with the knowledge that you enjoy Studio Ghibli films (me too). That really helped to paint the image for me. I actually got a lot of "Spirited Away" vibes from the beginning of this. I'll say that I felt Ruby's responses felt a bit too accepting of the bizarre nature of the "people" riding the bus, but overall I still rather enjoyed this. Great job!
You got me there 😂 I'm a sucker for Ghibli and used Spirited Away as my guide as what I wanted to do with this one.
Ruby was a bit too accepting with the issue but with the story she slowly becomes one of them as Exhaustion, so she doesn't have the energy to fight back towards the end.
@Lamington , You're very welcome. Honestly, I've been really enjoying your writing so far. You come up with some very interesting ideas, and I'm a sucker for supernatural/horror writing.
@Jay Ellis I love anything in the fantasy aspect too. I've actually got a published series called Transamagei if you wanted to give that a go too? It's fantasy/horror 😊
Ruby was a bit too accepting with the issue but with the story she slowly becomes one of them as Exhaustion, so she doesn't have the energy to fight back towards the end.
Thanks heaps for the encouragement!