Hot dang! This was an absolutely great read. I was bummed it was so short. I really feel like you could expand on this story further. It has a lot of really intriguing concepts. I felt bad for Gypsy, though. However, the way you described the end really nailed the atmosphere. Fantastic job!
Short and sweet is how I like it, but it could be expanded. Since this was for a contest, I could only work within a set word limit which I think worked well 😁
I felt so bad killing off her like that, but she was a good dog
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Short and sweet is how I like it, but it could be expanded. Since this was for a contest, I could only work within a set word limit which I think worked well 😁
I felt so bad killing off her like that, but she was a good dog
However, as tragic as it was, it's what really sold the story for me. It's what transformed this from an interesting story to a great story.