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J.楓
謝謝您超讚的建議○( ＾皿＾)っ 💗
3 years agoReply
接近無限透明的藍
我來幫你強化玻璃 💜寫的不錯呀，倒數第三行的"跟"替換成"對"，或是"對"和命運那行的"向"調換也可以。
如果要更進一步地展現出宿命論觀點，...無聲地/湊近我的耳畔/兀自鑽入/輕輕拍打我的耳膜/現在與未來的每一步/都是徒勞無功的前進
3 years agoReply
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