The voice of Julian is so sharp and self-aware - the aside about abbreviations, the descriptions of his neighbors, the way he knows exactly what Broden is doing to him but goes along with it anyway because of what his dad is like behind closed doors. And pulling off Marina's wig in front of the whole class is the kind of cruel, irreversible choice that feels both impulsive and inevitable.
well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
Here are my all other platforms:  Twitter: WinterKatie3  Insta: winterkatie687  Email: [email protected]  Discord: winterkatie

Hi, I’m Felica Spicer, a professional manga artist and commission illustrator.

I came across your work and was moved by its depth and storytelling.

I’d love to collaborate and turn it into a comic in my signature style.

I offer fair pricing and take pride in quality and emotional resonance.

Let’s connect on Discord if you're interested: felica_spicer

I honestly really liked this. I was concerned because it seemed like the start of an info dump, but you pulled it off gracefully. The way you wrote captured the main character nicely and gave the story that bit of personality, the thing I love most. It's not confusing to read and quite entertaining, great job!