I envy your ability to give descriptions, it helps set the scene and immediatley puts the reader in the 'fantasy' state of mind. I'm enjoying it, and will keep on following up :)
On a funny note, the word 'lief' means Love in dutch and is used similarly to the word 'dear', so I can't help read his name as 'My love Lance'/'Dear Lance'
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story we have planned! And I did not know that, but that is super interesting! I wonder if I can incorporate that into his character somehow ':)
On a funny note, the word 'lief' means Love in dutch and is used similarly to the word 'dear', so I can't help read his name as 'My love Lance'/'Dear Lance'