I enjoyed reading your fanfiction about Cato and Clove!First, we may have the impression that chapters follow one another according to a commonthread, but we understand really quick that it’s actually imagining a different version of thesame scene, in this case the first moment the characters admit their love for each other.Also, maybe it would be great to put a line on the context at the beginning of each chapter, sowhen we read your work in one sitting it’s easier to get into the new one.Furthermore, I find that it’s really great to read the “episodes” as they go out because they areindependent from each other and really lightweight and easy to read.I also appreciate that it’s accessible. It can be read at any age because everything is treatedwith subtlety. Moreover, the topic of romance is very popular and nice to read at the end of theday.The photos accompanying each of the chapters is also very interesting and set up a little mindatmosphere.Thank you for your work!