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Also how does a member of German infantry know such fluent English?
Why is his hair so long when it was mandated to cut it short in those times?
How are they standing in no mans land without getting shredded to bits by machine guns?
Other than that.
Ok story I guess? You missed the whole point.
Writing?
Its just that I asked for a story about war.
And you made a story about gay romance.
Now even if I had asked for a story about gay romance. Your characters were rushed and the story lacked world building and detail.
If that offends you I apologise. But there's nothing I can do to help.
Your story was bad.
Bye.