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I asked you to make a story about war and you made a gay romance instead.
Also how does a member of German infantry know such fluent English?
Why is his hair so long when it was mandated to cut it short in those times?
How are they standing in no mans land without getting shredded to bits by machine guns?
Other than that.
Ok story I guess? You missed the whole point.
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Lol
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@girlofsad
, What's funny?
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@Cigar roller
,how much you care tbh. I was going to be sad about it but then i realised ur rude to everyone and i found the situation quite funny
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@girlofsad
, How much I care about what?
Writing?
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@Cigar roller
How much you care about making people feel bad about themselves.
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@girlofsad
, Its not my intention to make you feel bad.
Its just that I asked for a story about war.
And you made a story about gay romance.
Now even if I had asked for a story about gay romance. Your characters were rushed and the story lacked world building and detail.
If that offends you I apologise. But there's nothing I can do to help.
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@Cigar roller
,ok cool. I understand, but please stop being an asshole to other people. Bye
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@girlofsad
, I'm not being an asshole I'm protesting trans theory.
Your story was bad.
Bye.
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Also how does a member of German infantry know such fluent English?
Why is his hair so long when it was mandated to cut it short in those times?
How are they standing in no mans land without getting shredded to bits by machine guns?
Other than that.
Ok story I guess? You missed the whole point.
Writing?
Its just that I asked for a story about war.
And you made a story about gay romance.
Now even if I had asked for a story about gay romance. Your characters were rushed and the story lacked world building and detail.
If that offends you I apologise. But there's nothing I can do to help.
Your story was bad.
Bye.