Length is perfectly fine, and this was a fantastic story. I love these kinds of stories, where it's someone close to you, a loved one, that ends up being killed and/or is the killer. Thanks for entering, and thanks for a fantastic story. And I would love for you to make it a book. It has some great book potential.
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