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poppyscomet09
if you fall ill pick you back up again
Rylan L.B
your the sweetest
Well written. And by the way you have structured it, the reader could see what is outside of the brackets as one and what is inside as well. But when both combined, these two parts become so much more profound. Very interesting and great idea. Only thing I would edit though is all lines within the brakets in cursive. Else, it's really good work. Keep it up.
Rylan L.B
Oh my gosh I seriously appreciate that you took the time to comment on this. I lose motivation a lot so hearing such positive things really means a lot.
@Rory L.B, I see. It's really nice to hear that you like my comment that much and that it is able to motivate you. And I hope you'll be able to stay more easily motivated in the fututre. All the best.
Rylan L.B
if you ever want to comment on any of my other work i'd really appreciate it. Obviously you don't have to but it's always good to hear from someone and no one else does lol @Liam Hunt,
@Rory L.B, You can suggest me one of your works, and I will try to find the time to read and comment them. I would also like if you could check out the poetry book I'm currently working on. The English version is called "Solace in Darkness". Maybe it's to your liking.
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