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凌夏
標點符號及排版有大問題，希望改善。
過於生澀僵硬的對話後面要加上人物動作，否則很像是台詞
3 years agoReply
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在對話的過程中，感覺可以加上說話者的動作，或是表情描寫之類的。而且就算是對話，句子說完也要句號哦。ps：就是一些標點符號的運用，但是網文好像又不是很在乎這些，可能我是古板派吧xd

是一個有趣的，現實的題材呢，我也想吃軟飯——
3 years agoReply
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