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SazzyAuzzy
I liked your story but the end felt very abrupt. I feel like you could have added more to your story and made it so much more. However, I did like your descriptions and characters. Well done. 
9 years agoReply
Ana Kruger
Thank you :) I was trying to make it a little abrupt, but if people noticed then I probably didn't do it quite right - but hey, that's learning!
I don't know if I'll continue writing, but if I do I'll keep that in mind.
9 years agoReply
Zpenut
A beautiful story. I love your writing style, so poetic and descriptive!
9 years agoReply
Ana Kruger
Thank you!
9 years agoReply
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