@Mia Flame, Well, I like how it feels so real with the music and your descriptions. The plot is a bit cliché but you tell it a 100x better (also, this kind of story is also what I interpret from the music). No problem!!
I love how you timed it to flow with the song! That totally changed the way I read it! It was amazing! I loved every bit about it. Thanks for entering!
Wow. That means so much. Thank you! I really don’t think it’s one of my best works, but i guess it isnt as bad as i think. Thank you again for such kind words! And such an awesome song and competition!
I can't wait to see what other people come up with!
What?!
I'M NOT CRYING!
I love how you timed it to flow with the song! That totally changed the way I read it! It was amazing! I loved every bit about it. Thanks for entering!