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Eli

Jeez that audio gave me actual chills. So good job!

1 year agoReply

Thank you. Glad to hear it was able to give you the chills. When it comes to horror, that's what you like to hear. 😄

1 year agoReply

3D audio version is up! If you would like to listen to it, you will need to wear your best pair of stereo headphones to experience the 3d effects. Hope you enjoy! :)

1 year agoReply

Kaleb finn

Holy crap. Your definitely getting bonus points for this 😉

1 year agoReply

@Kaleb finn, Yay! Bonus points! I wasn't originally planning on doing this, but I got some unexpected free time and just thought it might be fun. Glad I was able to get it done in time.

1 year agoReply

Kaleb finn

It was amazing sso glad you could do it, it definitely made you story mire creepy. Blew me away

1 year agoReply

@Kaleb finn, You saying that makes it worth it, then. Thank you so much for your feedback! 😊

1 year agoReply

Kaleb finn

@Jay Ellis, no problem😊

1 year agoReply

Eli

This is an amazing story your descriptive writing is amazing

1 year agoReply

Thank you so much! I'm actually working on trying to make an audio version of it, complete with original sound effects and music.

1 year agoReply

Eli

@Jay Ellis, np, good luck with the audio one!

1 year agoReply

Kaleb finn

This gives me chills. Best one yet😉

1 year agoReply

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

1 year agoReply

Marcelo Blanco

It was at the middle when I realized "wait, this is going somewhere else" and I'm glad it went the horror route. That's a terrifying trade-off for a power and I love it!

1 year agoReply

It started off as me just being like "hmm, I wonder what kind of magic power I would want?". I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to do the contest because I couldn't think of anything interesting. Then it struck me! I CAN MAKE THIS HORROR!!! I did a little evil laughing, words were written, and then here we are.

So glad to see you were happy with the direction I took it. This was so much fun to write. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

1 year agoReply

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