Finished the Prologue. Good setup for the story. I think I might actually enjoy reading this one. You have a lot of good elements in place, especially with the villains. How do you feel about "edit suggestions"? If you would like some, I would be willing to go through each chapter more thoroughly and make some suggestions for you. :)
然後按「加至主畫面」
*Googles to just find fanart*
*More confused than ever*
Anyway, good to know it's interesting you!