The only thing brighter than the stars is the fire in your eyes. Let's see if we can turn up the heat a little... with a touch that speaks volumes about what's waiting to unfold.

I really like this! There's some minor spelling errors but nothing that really distracts from the story or tone. I also really like the world building you set up with that dead language and the goddess itself. It gives the feeling that your world is its own thing that  doesn't just revolve around the main characters.