There's a professional quality to this and I'm seriously impressed. The way the characters were introduced was done so smooth and the characterization for each spoke volumes.
Wow just wow. I'm only a chapter in but already I'm in love with this story. From the descriptive writing style to the way the characters are introduced.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my style. This is my signature, I always want to make sure the reader can visualize something even remotely close to what I was imagining whilst writing this.
In the first paragraph December should be capitalized. Few minnor errors, but we all make them. Its a good start, so I'll keep reading for now, see where it goes
@SkyGuy_SoFly, Just liked your story and finished this part. Another typo spotted 😂😂 "out of sight, out of mind" I like your vivid descriptions and I learnt a lot from it. Glad to see your story is making it to the front page! 😁
@SkyGuy_SoFly, I shall prompty leave you a like and I may have to leave issue 2 for another day, since I am rather busy, but I shall be delving into it soon!
@Beckyness, Thank you. Sorry if i seem needy but I just like to watch the view count and like count rise. It makes me feel accomplished. Thank you so much for the support
@SkyGuy_SoFly, To be completely honest, nothing! College seems to have sapped my creative juices... I'll be sure to let you know when motivation returns
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Great job man.
I love it
I like your vivid descriptions and I learnt a lot from it. Glad to see your story is making it to the front page! 😁