Great story. I can totally picture the drowning scene in my mind. It is really scary. This story can definitely be edited/extended to be a more compelling and crafted horror story.
Thank you. I'll try to make it longer, but I just don't really like describing this day because I'm still freaked out about this after five years. I really won't go next to a river and I'll do my best to edit it more. Thank you for reading. :)