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exisitingsouls
Something I've noticed is that you tend to use "me" incorrectly. I don't know if that's the style of the book you want it to be, or that's how you naturally type it, but I just wanted to point it out. It can get slightly annoying (probably only to a grammar perfectionist as me) and reminds me of the whole "get out me car".
Werew
I was actually doing that intentionally, it being just the way that Tolla talks, but i find it hard to do consistently (I forget to most of the time) and I've been debating on doing away with it. Thanks for the feedback!
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