I love all of the new chapter titles! So Awesome!!:)

Your introduction pulls me to the story 'cause I feel like it's just enough of a teaser to give readers a little gist of what the story would be! I think I might have to spare a little time in my schedule to check the rest of the story out :)

Maybe consider adding a quote from one of the characters. Maybe one that sounds inspiring or have deep meaning to the progression of the novel.

I think you could put a little more detail into the synopsis to give the reader a better idea of what they're about to read, but overall it's very well-written. I admit I've already read a little of the first chapter, but I thought I'd go back and tell you what I thought of the intro. :)