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Cynderz
I love all of the new chapter titles! So Awesome!!:)
7 年前回覆
Frances
Thank you! I was bored 😬
7 年前回覆
Emoddess
Your introduction pulls me to the story 'cause I feel like it's just enough of a teaser to give readers a little gist of what the story would be! I think I might have to spare a little time in my schedule to check the rest of the story out :)
7 年前回覆
Frances
Thank you so much! That makes me feel SO much better. The summary has been giving me trouble
7 年前回覆
Cynderz
Maybe consider adding a quote from one of the characters. Maybe one that sounds inspiring or have deep meaning to the progression of the novel.
7 年前回覆
Frances
That's a really good idea!
7 年前回覆
Aretice N. Treader
I think you could put a little more detail into the synopsis to give the reader a better idea of what they're about to read, but overall it's very well-written. I admit I've already read a little of the first chapter, but I thought I'd go back and tell you what I thought of the intro. :)
7 年前回覆
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