@SongOfTheSky, It's really interesting. The whole plot is so good, i'm just attracted to it! You should totally continue it! I've never read something so good--written by someone off the street! I mean, YEAH! I LOVE IT!!!
@CockTail, wow!! Thank you so much!! I definitely plan on continuing it, and your encouragement makes me even more inspired to write more! Thank you! ❤