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應雨靜
會是長篇嗎？

對話方面可以再簡化一點和只表現重點。
5 years agoReply
有無餘
是的，會是長篇。
對話那裡是顯得有些累贅嗎？我會注意一下，謝謝你:)
5 years agoReply
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