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So, I really like the emotional connection in this part. The way that you described the pain that she was going through made me feel something. I felt sorry for her, what a horrible person Hendrix is! Maybe something to work on could be extending your writing a little. We get straight into the action, try building-up to when Hendrix comes along and starts messing with her. Were they in the same house together before it happened? Did he gatecrash? Just some small thoughts. Have a great day! :)
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Thanks for replying, i totally understand, app working OK for you? And no problem :)
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