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Hey man, great premise. I always love a good Rebellion. I have some ideas that might help focus your story a bit so I'll PM you with what I've got. Be sure to not overstate what your trying to get across. There is a thing as too much description. Don't just tell me what a character is like, show me with what they say, what they do, how they act.
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