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兀心
不能有超自然和奇幻元素......那真力和內氣怎麼算？純粹肌力不能傳來傳去或者放氣功打人嗎？
8 years agoReply
不日的基特
兀心大大，創主是那個惡名昭彰的分身眾多的用戶，她這個分身已經沒在用了QuQ
8 years agoReply
兀心
@野原小基特.,是這樣子嗎OAO
8 years agoReply
文維
我的快要結尾了
8 years agoReply
龍傲天
這是七殺碑文？
8 years agoReply
亞盾
我不是很能理解第二條規定
8 years agoReply

請問不理解的地方是在哪裏呢？
8 years agoReply
亞盾
@Apollō,嗯……描寫武的同時描寫俠這個部分，如果能夠舉一個例子那就最好了
8 years agoReply
@亞盾,
好像金庸表現出了：為國為民，俠之大者。
8 years agoReply
亞盾
@Apollō,嗯……還是不太明白
8 years agoReply
@亞盾,
總之先寫了出來再說吧。
或者先等別人寫出來。
8 years agoReply
亞盾
@Apollō,好主意呢
8 years agoReply

完全沒有人打算留言嗎...........
8 years agoReply
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