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3 weeks agoReply
虛妄之夜
給你，是我印象的你，女王之雪（笑）彷你文筆給你，可以放在介紹也行 ，專只給你個人↓

殺血無道丶狂風吹亦過

獻顯上一切贊歌丶敬祝王之臨

女王之容丶無可修飾

刀劍之間丶一切靜餘

眾劍在何處？喑處影之刀

飛舞一日過丶眾月舉起天

王之身暫停，望向民臣

肅殺之息𥲑展開

冷峻之𣊬而來

一刻一刀光劍影

一來又一法

亦去亦來

血之淚光中又倒一人


風之殺機吹掠過王之冠髮

亂海來擊臨危不亂

王之影、守之城

風止，影沒。

冷月狂雪，御上萬物

以穆之名！

萬民俯首，唯見月華如刃。

我就想弄個血腥的俠氣詩，之後再想下，就寫你吧。
3 weeks agoReply
御穆雪
仿我文筆?
3 weeks agoReply
虛妄之夜
@御穆雪,對艾，不似嗎？那抱歉？….嗯，我只能說這就是直覺之述你，我也覺得就是你哦😘 女王之雪殿下❄️ 總之給予你，隨你處置哦～眨眼✨
3 weeks agoReply
DASU
格友dasu姍姍來遲......
1 month agoReply
御穆雪
歡迎歡迎😊😊
1 month agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
茶水書友來茶水表了，先書籤~~XDD。
1 month agoReply
御穆雪
感謝丞相賜的書籤🥰🥰🥰
1 month agoReply
黃少
先加書籤晚點看
1 month agoReply
御穆雪
🥰🥰🥰
1 month agoReply
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