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鴨鴨
有人可以評論嗎？
2 months agoReply
竹本杏子
刻意為之的短句+第一人稱，讓人很快聯想到敘事者的精神狀態，進入主角的視野，很厲害！
即使省略許多環境敘述和背景故事，也不會妨礙閱讀（也不是需要特別解釋的時代背景，就能理所當然地看下去）。我覺得是因為知道了敘事者的狀態，這些要素反而不用太多。
（故事情節讓我有些眼熟，但似乎不是小說，而是漫畫？
2 months agoReply
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