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陰晴不定的腐男子
我一開始看不太懂，後來才發現原來斜體字是主角和人魚的過去，作品現在和過去的片段彼此不斷穿插。

我覺得你的文筆很好欸，有發揮出病態暴力的美學，還細細刻劃著料理和物品。

這部作品好黑暗、好變態、好病嬌，我還蠻喜歡的(⁠〃° ∀⁠ °⁠⁠〃⁠)

我現在開始好奇這是什麼樣的創作挑戰了(⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)
3 months agoReply
水母怪頭
謝謝你的喜歡，也謝謝你這麼認真的閱讀這篇作品！！！

⁄(⁄ ⁄ ⁄ω⁄ ⁄ ⁄)⁄我會繼續努力創作的💪！

其實這是一個「非人類男友」的創作挑戰辣，因為在苦思的時候剛好想吃魚肉（？），所以才寫出這篇XDD
3 months agoReply
陰晴不定的腐男子
@水母怪頭
喔，有，我後來有找到那個創作挑戰，感覺挺有趣的(⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)

我其實也有寫過一篇吃自己愛人的BL故事，不過是受主動讓攻吃。

謝謝你回覆我的留言，繼續創作喔，加油~
3 months agoReply
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