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胖达鲸 sponsored 500coins!
5 months agoReply
胖达鲸
原以为我这个年纪的老阿姨已经对校园文免疫了，没想到这篇故事十分有趣，看得我全程姨母笑。四个人物都很可爱。开场时年龄虽然小，但恰到好处地刻画出一群单纯而不幼稚、敏感而不矫情、冲动而不愚蠢、心机而不刻薄的青春期少年少女，真的很难得。

第二章就已经猜出来谁喜欢谁啦，这种“男主知道配角知道读者知道只有女主不知道”的暗恋故事，很容易让读者嫌弃“他怎么不长嘴啊”或者“她也太迟钝了吧”, 但是作者巧妙地规避了这两个坑。男主确实很早就表白了！但是女主的脑回路过于清奇，逻辑自洽地想歪了……哈哈哈不剧透，大家来看文吧。
5 months agoReply
阿骨打包子
我還回去重新看了一二章，你如果第二章就可以看出來你真的很厲害，我線都還沒開始埋呢！
5 months agoReply
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