The metaphor of the well as the shape of all unanswered questions is profound - the way falling becomes the original condition, the outsider and the fallen one as the same being, hope as the real wall, and death not as an exit but as the rope finally staying. The constitution of the universe as something we've always known but keep forgetting is a beautiful framing.
well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
Here are my all other platforms:  Twitter: WinterKatie3  Insta: winterkatie687  Email: [email protected]  Discord: winterkatie

Hi!
I finished your story and honestly, I was very impressed. The expressions, pacing, and drama are so strong that it feels perfect for a comic format. If adapted into a comic or Webtoon, it could attract even more people.
I commission artist who create Webtoons, comics, and character art. If you’re ever curious about how it might look visually, feel free to reach out to me.
You can contact me on Discord: eve_verse_ or Insta: eve_verse_.
Loved your work!

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