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夜沐 sponsored 100coins!
基本的潤飾，段落節奏，角色動作流暢度，與情感拿捏的描繪，都蠻出色的，我覺得有出版實體書的能力，願您在創作上永保熱情🌸
3 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
啊啊，謝謝你的認真閱讀，其實這篇小說是我某天⋯⋯作夢夢到的。

然後因為沒寫過校園小說，感覺跟我平常風格還是有點差（？

總之謝謝你的喜歡～～
3 months agoReply
夜沐
網路小說大家都習慣簡介一大篇，不注意就把序章或楔子作為簡介發佈，還是難得看到真正屬於「簡介」的內容ww

插圖跟簡短的介紹有點興趣，找時間來龜速閱讀～
3 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
啊哈哈，畢竟這真的是個短篇⋯⋯（黑歷史www
不過簡介真的要簡一點，因為簡介存在的意義就是要用最短的篇幅抓到讀者的目光啊。
3 months agoReply
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