Hello, I am Mireille Parsons . I just finished your story, and I’m really impressed by your storytelling! Have you ever thought about turning your story into a comic? I’m a professional manga/comic artist with years of experience. My commissions are open and I’d love to collaborate with you to bring your narrative to life visually.I charged only $40-$50 for each page of comic consist on 4 to 5 panels. If you're interested, I’d be happy to share my work and discuss how we can make this happen.Feel free to connect with me on Discord (mireille999) or let me know the best way to reach you!

Across Worlds: Legends Tale opens with cinematic intensity and sweeping imagery. The battle scene is vivid and atmospheric, pulling readers straight into a world trembling with magic, war, and emotional weight. The author does an excellent job establishing a dramatic tone,one that feels like the climax of an epic saga.
The confrontation between the two warriors is especially compelling. There’s emotional gravity in their exchange, hinting at a deep backstory and a shattered bond. Lines like “We could’ve built the future together…” are simple yet effective, resonating with the theme of betrayal and broken dreams.
Stylistically, the prose is polished and evocative, though it leans heavily into high fantasy tropes. Readers who enjoy classic fantasy battles and morally complex characters will likely be hooked. However, to fully shine, the story may benefit from a slightly more unique narrative hook in the opening,something to distinguish it from other epic fantasy fare.
That said, if the rest of the story builds on this intensity with layered characters and world,building, it has the potential to be a gripping fantasy tale.