Your sentence presents an intriguing premise, but it has a few grammatical errors and could be made more engaging with slight refinements. Here’s a revised version with improved clarity and flow:
Imagine being only 15 when the creator of the world calls upon you to save it—when all you want is a normal high school romance with a guy who can't stand you.
Why did the creator choose her? She doesn’t see herself as anything special, but does everyone else see her the same way?
If she doesn’t want to survive, does she even have the right to die?
Will she win over the guy she loves, or will her fate take an unexpected turn?
This version enhances readability, corrects grammar ("does everyone else sees" → "does everyone else see," "If she don't" → "If she doesn’t"), and adds a bit more dramatic tension. Let me know if you’d like further tweaks!
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Imagine being only 15 when the creator of the world calls upon you to save it—when all you want is a normal high school romance with a guy who can't stand you.
Why did the creator choose her? She doesn’t see herself as anything special, but does everyone else see her the same way?
If she doesn’t want to survive, does she even have the right to die?
Will she win over the guy she loves, or will her fate take an unexpected turn?
This version enhances readability, corrects grammar ("does everyone else sees" → "does everyone else see," "If she don't" → "If she doesn’t"), and adds a bit more dramatic tension. Let me know if you’d like further tweaks!