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4 months agoReply
烏龍茶
謝謝打賞！有些小驚訝XD
4 months agoReply
無名
目前看到第七章，情節還不錯，引人入勝✨

不過為什麼有種廣東話口話翻譯成書面語的感覺🤔，有些地方感覺有點生硬。
8 months agoReply
烏龍茶
謝謝你! 因為我還不習慣用書面語寫，所以文筆還要再努力>.< 如果之後有時間會再重修一次
8 months agoReply
追魚
好看好看，第二部什麼時候出？
1 year agoReply
烏龍茶
我會努力的！XD
1 year agoReply
追魚
@烏龍茶,坐等
1 year agoReply
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1 year agoReply
烏龍茶
感謝感謝！
1 year agoReply
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新年快樂！
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