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aefadawsd
The intro is confusing but since I like murders, I am gonna give this a shot. But maybe consider changing the intro a little.
9 years agoReply
Bri.tt.any.y
The first chapter or the description? 
Ill consider changing it if I have more say its confusing or ill go back through and see. 
9 years agoReply
aefadawsd
@Bri.tt.any.y, I meant the description. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs on the first chapter. I'm sorry, it really isn't my thing.
9 years agoReply
Bri.tt.any.y
@Lata, oh, okay! I was confused by what you meant. Is it maybe too vulgar for you?
9 years agoReply
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