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空殼花生 sponsored 168coins!
預祝新年快樂！(⁠｡⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠｡⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♡
4 months agoReply
榮Rong*send森
謝謝啦~也祝你新年快樂~
3 months agoReply
空殼花生
對了，正如我當初的作品唯一的留言者給出的建議；我也給出相同的建議，多參加創作挑戰。


一來可以磨練文筆、二來可以讓更多人看到你和你的作品、三來認識其他創作者可以跟他們請教寫作技巧，百利無一害。
7 months agoReply
榮Rong*send森
哈哈，確實，我有空會去參加的，你也加油哦
7 months agoReply
空殼花生
(⁠｡⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠｡⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♡
7 months agoReply
W.H. sponsored 336coins!
新年快樂，恭喜發財！！

祝龍年健康平安、心想事成、順心順利、順風順水、萬事如意、天天開懷、日日好日🎉🎉🎉

我後來才發現這裡有三個作者，所以再補兩份「168」，祝你們新年快樂 🎊🎊🎊
2 years agoReply
W.H. sponsored 168coins!
新年快樂，恭喜發財！！

祝龍年健康平安、心想事成、順心順利、順風順水、萬事如意、天天開懷、日日好日🎉🎉🎉
2 years agoReply
kaiyigao
感謝大大！
2 years agoReply
榮Rong*send森
感謝您的喜歡，也祝您新年快樂！！
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@榮Rong*send森,不客氣＆謝啦^^
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@kaiyigao,不客氣^^
2 years agoReply
空殼花生
剛看完，想提出一個問題。就是逗號使用太多，斷句可以在細一點點。(⁠｡⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠｡⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♡
2 years agoReply
榮Rong*send森
好勒，我再加強
2 years agoReply
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