This was a delightful read. Its rare to read about the evolution of a writer and its made me look forward to the next chapter.
P.S. you might want to proofread it one more time. ;)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) - I don't think that'll help, though, I've read it through plenty of times but English is not my first language and I don't think it'll get much better than this.
P.S. you might want to proofread it one more time. ;)