Tip on writing in the future, Try not to use -ette with anything but words it already existed with.
To other authors/readers, it may seem lazy or immediately will make readers/authors sigh or roll their eyes.
(I'm not sending hate, I'm genuinely trying to help since I see a lot of other authors get made fun of or just hated on for doing certain things like this, and as a person who is aiming to be a professional author these are just some tips I've learned along the way.
Again no hate, I just want to help avoid you being made fun of or authors/readers thinking you're cringy/not taking you seriously or thinking that you are a troll/ a joke)
To give an example here is your sentence, which is really "He was sitting in a child's seat on a rolling cart, staring at the greenette"
Again Try to avoid using -ette in any word it was not originally paired with. Instead, try this:
"He was sitting in a child's seat on a rolling cart, staring at the *Insert word that describes the shade of color* green haired boy."
Or alternatively, "There was a young boy, seemingly about Izuku's age, staring at the messy green haired boy"
I am also not a professional author, but what I've learned from other authors is to try and avoid using ette unless it's already paired with that word, ex: brunette.
No hate, this is really good, I'm just trying to help.
Oh hey! Yeah sorry about that. When I wrote this, I had read a lot of fiction that used the words how I did so I just followed along. It wasn't until recently that I learned it's not necessarily the best thing to do.
@Witch-with-a-stick, Oh my gosh! I'm so sorry, yeah this fic has been finished for a while now. I guess I forgot to continue updating on this platform (I main Ao3 and Wattpad). But unfortunately, I will not be updating this story on this platform any further than I have today but the full thing is up on my Ao3 and Wattpad accounts. (If you're interested, Ao3: x3x_ash_x3x and Wattpad: x3x_leo_x3x)
To other authors/readers, it may seem lazy or immediately will make readers/authors sigh or roll their eyes.
(I'm not sending hate, I'm genuinely trying to help since I see a lot of other authors get made fun of or just hated on for doing certain things like this, and as a person who is aiming to be a professional author these are just some tips I've learned along the way.
Again no hate, I just want to help avoid you being made fun of or authors/readers thinking you're cringy/not taking you seriously or thinking that you are a troll/ a joke)
To give an example here is your sentence, which is really
"He was sitting in a child's seat on a rolling cart, staring at the greenette"
Again Try to avoid using -ette in any word it was not originally paired with.
Instead, try this:
"He was sitting in a child's seat on a rolling cart, staring at the *Insert word that describes the shade of color* green haired boy."
Or alternatively, "There was a young boy, seemingly about Izuku's age, staring at the messy green haired boy"
I am also not a professional author, but what I've learned from other authors is to try and avoid using ette unless it's already paired with that word, ex: brunette.
No hate, this is really good, I'm just trying to help.