Hey, I just finished reading your story and loved it! Your characters and pacing were spot on truly graphic novel worthy! I'm a professional comic/manga/Webtoon cover artist open for commissions. If you'd like to collaborate, hit me up on Discord: flemingmichelle28. Keep up the amazing work! 

I like it! But did you edit it? There seems to be many grammar mistakes, but other than that. It's great! I wonder why ThunderClan is offering the cats help! And eat bones, lol. I like it.